First paper Narrative  Feedback There are missing pieces of punctuation here There are too many

First paper Narrative  Feedback There are missing pieces of punctuation here There are too many

First paper Narrative  Feedback There are missing pieces of punctuation here. There are too many run-on sentences and missing words. Second paper/  Compare and Contast Final Feedback Indent paragraphs. Please be sure all paragraphs are double-spaced -Understudies? I don’t understand what this is. Only in acting is there a definition of an ‘understudy’ whose role is to replace the main actor if something goes wrong. There are sentences here that are missing punctuation. There are sentences here that are unclear. TMyFirstPetNarrative.pdfHighSchoolvs.College1.pdf